by Em
Michael, though short this is very powerful and raw write which many people can relate too. I do like these short forms as it gives the writer less chance to get a point across and you always seem to do it with such umpth. |
by Ben Pickard
Great stuff, Michael. |
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Sir L, |
by Ben Pickard
Yes, sorry Michael, I should have been clearer. I understand exactly what you meant and your meaning shouldn't be lost on anyone. The use of the word 'ugly' in this sense is purely from the sufferer's perspective. |
This is relatable 110%. The imagination and vividness is amazing. Well done on getting such a powerful message into 3 lines. great work. |