What a fail....

by Everlasting   Aug 9, 2016


Today, I'll write just to write like I often do
with my eyes close and my fingers on the keyboard
I won't care if I type something off
today, i have a date with poetry
today, I'll be blind
and I won't care what I will write

there's something awfully beautiful in typing blindfolded
it's like you can see your mind

blank, blackm then white
there is the light

oh dadrn, I opened my eyes

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I agree with Sir Lancelot, this is a unique and clever write. I was also about to point out the typos, but then I realized, it was unnecessary. Your poetry has really matured in a sense, Ms. Lucero, based on your poems on your previous accounts, I can say you have taken a new different style... but I might be wrong. Haha.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I agree with Sir Lancelot, this is a unique and clever write. I was also about to point out the typos, but then I realized, it was unnecessary. Your poetry has really matured in a sense, Ms. Lucero, based on your poems on your previous accounts, I can say you have taken a new different style... but I might be wrong. Haha.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Another poem that both baffles me, amuses me and impresses me with it's originality all at once.
    I got a couple of lines in and was about to point out a typo. It was only when I got to the end of the poem that I realised how thoroughly ridiculous and irrelevant to this piece that would be!
    There is something freeing in just being able to write and let it flow; I just wish I could do it with the ease and success you seem to be able to do it.

    SL

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