Rising Phoenix (Haiku)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Aug 9, 2016


My new beginning,
Ever existing among
The red hot ashes.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Amariah

    This is an excellent little piece that could well be in the 'senryu' bracket. Haiku tend to deal with nature, but this one straddles both, I guess.
    There is nothing more inspirational than seeing someone 'rise from the ashes' which is why the phoenix is such a wonderful and iconic mythical bird.

    SL

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