The Question

by IdTakeABulletForYou   Aug 10, 2016


"Am I in trouble?"
she asked, as an ambulance
rushed toward the scene.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Vicente

    This is too open-ended for me. Not in a bad way, though. It just makes my mind run amuck with different scenes that this could be in. Did she kill someone, is the government after her, did she get injured, ect. This is probably what you were going for. Provocation.

  • 8 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This was powerful and raises a lot of questions fof the reader!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Stephen, in 3 short lines you have managed to open up about a million questions, none of them pointing to a happy outcome. Well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I also felt this was worth a nomination.. :) maybe this is "the one"! :)
    Well done again, friend.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    S. A very powerful write within 3 lines with endless possibility as the others have already stated which makes the reader ponder and want more.
    Fantastic job and one that I felt (and did) needed nominating.

    All the best, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      It won't let me reply to Sir L for some reason, so I'll just thank you both in this spot right here. To think, all these Senryu's from me started when I read your piece "Please be careful", Em!

      Thank you for the comment, Sir L; and for the comment/nom, Em!!

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