Wonderful S! Such a powerful three lines!! It has so many questions to go with it. Was it self harm? An accident? Something else? |
The little I did sleep last night produced this, so I can't say in spite of the nightmares that it wasn't a productive night. |
by Ben Pickard
Hello Stephen, |
by Em
S. A very powerful write within 3 lines with endless possibility as the others have already stated which makes the reader ponder and want more. |
It won't let me reply to Sir L for some reason, so I'll just thank you both in this spot right here. To think, all these Senryu's from me started when I read your piece "Please be careful", Em! |
I also felt this was worth a nomination.. :) maybe this is "the one"! :) |
-super hug- |
by Brenda
Stephen, in 3 short lines you have managed to open up about a million questions, none of them pointing to a happy outcome. Well done! |
by Angel Tears
This was powerful and raises a lot of questions fof the reader! |
by Vicente
This is too open-ended for me. Not in a bad way, though. It just makes my mind run amuck with different scenes that this could be in. Did she kill someone, is the government after her, did she get injured, ect. This is probably what you were going for. Provocation. |