Can't believe I almost missed you

by Everlasting   Aug 12, 2016


I almost missed you!

I knew I should have aimed towards your heart
But I was never good at shooting love to people

Instead, I hit your head with an arrow of lust

Bang!

And you dripped heated thoughts
all over my world

Just bleeding your desires
all over me

Until you passed onto another life

and I moved on.

Random --- August 11, 2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Luce, Luce, Luce I love the way you write....as I always said ,I'm a fan. ..lol.. This is stunning
    here's my 5/5 for this.

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    This pretty little love poem is fun and full of flare.. It has a unique placement..

    I really adore this poem..The ending grabs the heart..

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Random?? No its simply life and your gift of writing! A skill to be admired!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Lucero, random or not this is beautiful and so sad because it's a tale of loving and sending love to the wrong people or place is head instead of heart. All I can say is it's a good job it wasn't his pants lol..

    Love is tough and I'm still trying to figure it out.
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Your randomness is really beautiful, Ms. Lucero! Haha.

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