The Abandoned.

by Time Cat   Aug 12, 2016


Look! Look! Come and see!
The children laugh and point at thee.
To the men who march with ball and chain.
At those who will never remain.
I give to thee a candle of hope.
To ease your heart and help you dote.
In the grey lit wastes where you shall march.
I shall shall pray for thee to remain unharmed.
Goodbye my old friends I will tend to thee.
In the Edge of Serenity.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This flows very well. Nice job on the structure and rhyme.

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Welcome to P&Q
    Lovely rhyming piece as others have already stated. I enjoyed reading it.
    It flows well!

    Well done on your first piece here.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Welcome to P&Qs

    You're piece may be short but it gives out a very clear message. I like the rhyming and use of language and look forward to reading more.

    All the best, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Welcome to PnQ's.

    Lovely poem with good flow and use of language.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello and a warm welcome to the site.

    This is a fluent and well rhymed little piece which I love as the poetry world needs an injection of good rhyme again.

    Great first post,

    SL

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