Comments : Time Will Not Heal The Broken Heart

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Prateek, this is a wonderful yet sad tale of loving someone so deeply that you cannot forget them and you probably won't.
    My first 'love' is often remembered, the good, the bad and the ugly.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Excellent

    you deserved a 5 stars
    voted *****

    Such a sweet yet sad poem..deep yet easily to understand. ..
    Everything just ended up like that... it's like a snap or a wink. . hope love will find u...

    I like the way Anaphora formed in this stanza...
    I like the way you injected your feelings here. ..How you longed for her to come back

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    I remember all the times you laughed, I remember all the times you were angry.
    I remember all the times you were happy, I remember all the times you cried..
    I remember every moment we were together, I will remember them forever.

    I know now that I'll never be able to love anyone again, until we meet again !!
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    Lovely Piece. .
    Keep it up..

    Gel