Comments : Acrostic on Humour

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Cassie

    This is a very accomplished little acrostic - a form that's not half as easy as people think when done properly.

    Well written,

    Sl

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Cassie,

    Humor - I love your interpretation on this word. Being fearful of clowns, I think?

    As well as the acrostic rules you have used rhyme too - this doubles the difficulty, but you have made a good job. My favourite line is this:
    Off and away my legs would hare.
    ^
    A unique way of saying I'd run away. The imagery of the flailing hare legs is magical and effective.

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by cassie hughes

      Thanks Mr D.
      I am not really fearful of clowns but they do send shivers down my spine and I know a lot of people are frightened of them.
      I really appreciate your comments.

      Regards

      Cassie

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Cassie this is a fabulous acrostic and there's nothing funny about clowns, I for one are scared of them lol so this is really relatable to me and I'd leg it too if I saw one.
    As the others have said acrostics aren't easy but to rhyme them too makes it much harder but you did a fantastic job.
    Well done, Em