Hapless

by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko   Aug 15, 2016


A thousand
cherry blossom petals
swirling on a
two-colored symphony,
patiently waiting
for Spring...

Twilight has become deaf,
no more bluebirds on a lonely sky,
evening sadness.

Spring won't come.

    report violation
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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is truly beautiful. The imagery leaves me feeling happy and appreciative of what I have for some reason.

    All the best, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What beautiful imagery tinged with sadness.
    No more bluebirds on a lonely sky
    Loved it Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You paint such a vivid scene. Beautiful

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    My...the opening has left me with such a lovely imagery and your usage of words makes nature so beautiful and at the same time leaving a picture of sadness...lovely read!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Such a beautiful write, lovely imagery.

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