Comments : The Kite

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    I like this one. There's a tint of sadness and an inspiring tale that's unfolding in every line. I'd take 'kite' as a metaphor for freedom and happiness. We should all go and fly a kite! Haha. Nicely penned!

    --- MKKK

  • 8 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Thanks for sharing - sad but enlightening. We all have our inner struggles but sometimes hide ourselves from others/isolate ourselves. When a person is in pain, naturally they want help, but a person tends to habitually burn bridges at the same time. We must rely on our own love before we can rely on anothers.

    • 8 years ago

      by Domenico Sottile

      Thank you for the encouragement, I am so glad you really absorbed the full meaning of the poem.

      Domenico