Texas Blues (Haiku)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Aug 16, 2016


If only my tears
Were Texas rain, this summer
Heat would disappear.

If only my tears
Were Texas rain, the summer
Red would turn to blue.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Jessica,

    really a great piece ..sounds like a semi chant and a Haiku to me. .;)
    keep on writing girl

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderful, heartfelt and moving double haiku, Jessica.
    In honesty, I'm not often a fan of repetition of words in short forms but here it simply adds to the emotion.
    I'm sorry that this one passed me by until now; it really is excellent work.

    take care,

    Ben

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