Comments : Texas Blues (Haiku)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderful, heartfelt and moving double haiku, Jessica.
    In honesty, I'm not often a fan of repetition of words in short forms but here it simply adds to the emotion.
    I'm sorry that this one passed me by until now; it really is excellent work.

    take care,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Jessica,

    really a great piece ..sounds like a semi chant and a Haiku to me. .;)
    keep on writing girl

    Gel