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by Ben Pickard
A wonderful, heartfelt and moving double haiku, Jessica. In honesty, I'm not often a fan of repetition of words in short forms but here it simply adds to the emotion. I'm sorry that this one passed me by until now; it really is excellent work. take care, Ben
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
Hi Jessica, really a great piece ..sounds like a semi chant and a Haiku to me. .;) keep on writing girl Gel