Valentine (*self-knowledge)

A sad write but well done. Makes me think you had really messed up and now you stand, wilted flowers in your hand trying to woo your valentine back in good graces.

King Harry, this may be short but it says alot in so little which is the kind of poetry I like because (I feel) some poetry can go on and on and kind of loses it's sparkle so to speak though there are some fantastic writers here that write long poetry and keep the rhythm and unforced rhyming throughout.
Anyhow.....

1/ This paints a very vivid, sad image and it makes me wonder why you have wilted roses in your hand. Was it something you did or was it your love or was it mutual? Though because you're in front of them it makes me think this was their doing especially as you have roses in hand.

2/ I can totally relate to this and I think that even though you may blame yourself it may not be entirely your fault because in these times we always blame ourselves no matter what happened or who was to blame.

3/ I take this more than one way as the rain are tears and the sunshine is happiness but they are also perceived as the weather too.. I'm not sure.

Great write,
Em