Comments : What Do You Think?

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello up there...

    It is clear you like to look at things in an unorthodox way...

    I like that - after all, is this not how we became to be 'we' intertwining until 'we' replaced our fins and gills, replacing them with air breathing and land propelling instruments? As for hairs on my toe nails - hmm, have you been looking?

    Well done - Nominated!

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi,

    I must say I always look forward to reading your poems because they are always unique and enthralling but always so adventurous and written well.

    I've got to admit that I read this twice and both times I liked something else.
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is simply unique and so well crafted! you do have a way to bring out things and portray them in ways one has not even realized...well penned!

  • 8 years ago

    by ether

    This was so cool to read. I loved the content and the style. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    What an unusual yet vivid poem. Really unique with lots of unusual ideas. Really enjoyed it very much. Milly x