Comments : Thirteen Steps

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An interesting poem I almost felt like a bit of a rap. Could do with splitting up into stanzas (verses) but overall very good Milly xx

    • 8 years ago

      by Wayne Gates

      I know it is not very polished. It mostly was about the message. I write about what bothers me. I am working on coming to grips with my condition. Thanks for the input.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wayne, this really hit home for me as my Dad suffers from this condition too.
    A great piece with a great message.
    All the best, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Your poems always give me a message... I admire the courage to move on despite the fear of the troubles being faced (fear has been conquered). Thumb up 4 u!