by Faithless Watermelon Aug 25, 2016
category :
Life, society /
other
A city |
by Em
Wow is all I can say!! |
by Brenda
Totally blown away! |
by ether
This is brilliant. So brilliant I wish I could hear it read out loud instead of reading it because I think that's what this calls for - which is a feeling I get only when reading poetry of a very high calibre. I love the form, the fragmented rhyme (and fragmented sentences) and the metaphor of "salted thunder". 5/5 |