by Mr. Darcy
Hello Milly, |
Thank you Michael very much for your advice. As always very much appreciated. It is a poem drawn from my experience of growing up by the sea. The reference to the soles of the feet is because in the movie Splash and in the Grimm series' it was standard that when a mermaid's tail was out of the water and dry it becomes legs but when wet again becomes a tail. |
by Ben Pickard
Milly, |
Milly this is another beautiful piece of yours. I love the sea and everything that comes with it. It gives me such great peace and for a brief moment nothing matters. Take care and thank you for sharing. |
by Meena Krish
This has been a nice read, a Walt Disney Mermaid and reality put together and the imagery flows well with the read till the end...nice work. |
by Em
All I can say is wow. Glad to have you,back! |
Thank you all for your lovely comments they are very much appreciated. Milly x |
by Dreamofolwin
I LOVE this! I've never read a poem about mermaids before.... it is so enchanting a poem and I love the imagery throughout :) |
I am including this write in the list of excellent. |
Hello, |
Thank you all very much for your comments they are always very much appreciated and inspiring - much love Milly x |
by Brenda
Milly, I apologize for not seeing this sooner. What a lovely poem! I loved the mermaids and your visuals transport you right there. Beautiful write! Take care-Brenda |
by Everlasting
Enjoyable read. Poor mermaid. It's a bittersweet story. Well done. |