Comments : What About the Times it's Him

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    So very true. The man you should be looking up to and should be your role model on what you should be seeking in a potential mate shouldn't be the one who makes you cry and breaks your heart and a abuses you. He should be your protector. You did a really awesome write putting this into words. Your dad should be your world not the one destroying it for future relationships. Well done-

    • 8 years ago

      by Someone Invisible

      Thank you. This was a slightly personal poem. Im still not comfortavle writing completely about my childhood but im glad i still got my message across.