Comments : Diesel, Disaronno. Dirt & Hurt

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    This is so sad, sadder still, is the reality that this situation, or very similar goes on all around the world. Sweet Melly - it is children like her that I really feel sorry for. Who picks up the broken pieces and reassembles them in a order so that this cycle doesn't repeat itself!

    Well done, an epic write.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I have to agree with Michael this is sad and even worse that this situation happens day in and out.

    You told the story well and kept me interested throughout.
    Em