Comments : Hold on, breathe.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is such a sad piece full of emotion.
    It's a shame that in our hour of need we seem to write the best pieces.. Mine all seem to be anyway.
    I don't like the pain within this poem as its all too relatable (not feeling good enough but not cutting) but I do like the dash of hope within the last stanza.

    All the best, Em

    If you need to talk I'm here (nominated)

    • 8 years ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Thank you so much! My pieces always seem to be best in times of need too. I apprienciate the love!

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A very sad piece. Writing poetry when feeling any strong Emotion seems to bring out the best writing in us. I think this is because everyone has felt strong emotion at some time or another and can relate in some way. Milly xx