On Target -

by Everlasting   Sep 1, 2016


A deer eats green grass
as winds sway pastures in warning;
a tiger leaps, wham!

Written by: L.L.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    WOH,,, so much imagery from this small piece. LOVE IT! :))

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Liked the imagery of this little poem Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello, a nice piece and one I see as a tad 'I'm going to do it my way' and 'I won't let the form dictate the poem' for this I commend you. *claps* *smiles* *coughs* *blushes* *skulks away* *finds a corner* *starts a fire* *throws on poetry rule book* *smiles again* ...

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Nice little piece

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent little piece! :)

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