My Drug

by 14th   Sep 1, 2016


My Drug

It's been along time since I wrote you one
But your a blessing to me
The light at the end of the tunnel
When my life was full of tragedy
It's a wonderful feeling to know
I feel safe with you
My addiction to loving you is a drug
I can never give you enough
And my pleasure
is to keep giving you more and more

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  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi,

    It's been along time since I wrote you one
    But your a blessing to me

    ^^
    =sweet and romantic lines

    The light at the end of the tunnel
    When my life was full of tragedy
    ^^
    =strikingly powerful lines

    It's a wonderful feeling to know
    I feel safe with you
    ^^
    = soft and full of feelings

    My addiction to loving you is a drug
    I can never give you enough
    ^^
    = I have some suggestions here
    My addiction (of ) loving you (,) is a drug.

    And my pleasure
    is to keep giving you more and more
    ^^
    = already high in love here. ..

    All in all this is a lovely piece

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by 14th

      Thank you that means the world to me

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A sweet little piece with wonderful rhyming.
    I hope the person this was intended for read it.

    Em