Love Terminology

by DarkLight   Sep 7, 2016


Your eyes are milky way to my heart
galaxy full of wonders
morning star to my waking.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely poem that says all it needs to. Oh, for more happy poetry like this on-site, lol

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Ben you making my afternoon bearable. Thanks.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A sweet little piece here.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    Short, sweet, and to the point.
    Initially I thought you'd written a senryu until I realized it was a bit lengthier.
    Well done, nicely expressed.
    ~Dean

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks Dean Kuch,
      I went for a senryu but i realized had more to offer.

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