Where Am I?
by Tasha Sep 9, 2016
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8 years ago
by Tasha
Thank you. I really wanted people to take what they want away from it because it's so easy to lose yourself in many different ways. At least that's how I feel. Again thank you.
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8 years agoby Em
Welcome Tasha to P&Qs,
What a lovely little piece you have written here. I must admit I'm a sucker for rhyming poetry as that's mainly what I write though as Ben says its like a dying art.
The content of this piece is rather enthralling because it makes the reader think why exactly this person feels the way they do and at first I thought depression then I re-read and wasn't so sure.
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8 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Hello Tasha and a warm welcome to the site.
There seems to be an influx of rhyming poets at P&Q recently, and I love that as I am one myself, primarily. It seems to be a dying art, but when done properly, is an absolute joy to read.
As to the content, why has this person lost themselves? Depression? A failed relationship? have they done something awful? Anyway, finding a way back to our true selves is often the hardest thing to do.
Keep writing, this is excellent,
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8 years ago
by Tasha
Thank you Ben. I really appreciate it. As for the content yes it is the first two. I would like to think that I haven't done too awful. Yes it is hard to find myself again but writing and reading from everyone is helping me.
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