Comments : Psychosis Scribblings

  • 8 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    I'm getting ready for my favourite time of year and I come across this little beauty...

    I had zombie in mind when reading, not dead but numbed by thoughts and feeling...
    I imagined a stitched up mouth cut free... and all that emerged were moth balls,wings and dust...
    I love a reflection being portrayed as a painting... You can stair for hours, until you've drove yourself crazy!!!

    Bless you <3

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, what wonderful, vivid yet somewhat disturbing imagery only because of the
    'paint chipping, flesh, splatters

    like a stinging rain storm.'
    ^^
    This imagery is wow.. Shows how hurt this person is and how they feel unworthy, my interpretation anyway.

    All the best, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    This has a very eerie ambiance about it, Andrea.
    I enjoyed this immensely.
    Old paintings and portraits I have always found to be rather creepy for some reason, especially if the subject is deceased.
    Excellent writing.
    ~Dean

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Wonderful piece. I think this is one of my favourites, different from your usual subject matter. Loved it Millyx

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, interesting write, I loved the imagery you put out. A person losing their mind-brilliant as always-loved it!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

    Wow! Really, really dark! This piece is darkly sad and the title really sums up the content of this piece.

    These moths will consume the air that I breathe-

    ^^
    Oh, how I adore this line...

    Great job! Take care!

    --- MKKK