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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Oh Naomi. I am sorry that you feel like this. My inbox is always open, come talk to me.

    Well done on a great senryu though.
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi

    As good a senryu as this is, the content is absolute nonsense, good woman; I simply won't hear of it.
    Now you pull yourself together or a good hard spanking will be coming your way, which I'm more than happy to do, lol

    Take care and chin up, girl,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      I think today I'm okay for a spanking. But thank you for the offer, Ben.
      Have no fear, I am fine.
      Its just writing to paper.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Now, now Ben don't be getting all those ladies jealous lol

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I've had to learn to live with upsetting a few down the years whilst trying to please the majority...

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Can't please everyone lol

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi,

    Brilliant Senryu but sad piece

    Will vote 5/5 for this.

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Thank you all for comments. Have no fear, im just expressing through poetry. All is well :)