If You (Diacope + Anaphora)

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Sep 12, 2016


If you will leave me hanging
I will die, die, die.

If you will supersede me with someone else
I will cry,cry,cry.

Don't you dare ask me
Why,why, why?

If you will just say
goodbye, bye, bye.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    You are amazing!! Ben has competition

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Oh no no no. . Sir Ben is one of my Idol here. . I'm also a fan.. Thank you if you see me like that. . lol

      Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello Sir Ben, Sir Darcy and Pretty Em,

    thank you for liking my piece actually guys you 3 are my biggest influence. .

    Great day to all of you.

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Gel,

    This is a unique piece and I haven't heard of those forms before so will have to research them and give it a go. I like the rhyming and the message.
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    Like Ben, I enjoy repetition. Like a refrain it hammers home a point. The fact the repetition rhymes emphasis it.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello gel,

    I like this. It's short and rather sweet in an odd sort of way. The layout and repetition of words is pleasing and it left me almost humming along to it.

    Take care,

    Ben

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