Hello gel,

I like this. It's short and rather sweet in an odd sort of way. The layout and repetition of words is pleasing and it left me almost humming along to it.

Take care,

Ben

Hello Gel,

Like Ben, I enjoy repetition. Like a refrain it hammers home a point. The fact the repetition rhymes emphasis it.

Well done,

Michael

Gel,

This is a unique piece and I haven't heard of those forms before so will have to research them and give it a go. I like the rhyming and the message.
Em

Hello Sir Ben, Sir Darcy and Pretty Em,

thank you for liking my piece actually guys you 3 are my biggest influence. .

Great day to all of you.

Gel

You are amazing!! Ben has competition