This wistful piece reminds me of a film I watched called 'Before Sunrise' about a couple of star-crossed lovers who meet on their travels and their lives are entwined from there on. There are two more wonderful films that follow too, but I'm getting off-point now!

If I have a suggestion, it may be to change '3' to 'three' but that's personal taste and is up to you entirely.

Great write,

Ben

There is a lot more then what is penned in this poem. There is a longing, a sadness a long ago togetherness time which seems to be not there anymore...only memories which the writer yearns for.

I like the descriptions and the imagery here...touching write, hope you are okay...take care.

This write is touching and personal.

The imagery is wonderful though. Em

Such a lovely write-so much yearning for a lost love. Your imagery transport you right into your story-well done-

M ......this is freakin awesome - seriously dude - i don't even know where to start, I totally bow to you on this on.

Added to favourites so don't ever delete.

Ben