Sometimes, [9 syllables]

by Everlasting   Sep 18, 2016


My poems
like the moon;
reflect light

written by: L.L.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Stunning Lucero absolutely stunning!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Great piece..

    moon reflects light from the sun like your poem.. :)

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Luceo,

    I see you're pushing boundaries here...

    And I like it. Word's are like paint, it's how we use them that makes the difference between, a simple collection of ramblings, or in this case, a simile of how you feel your poems affect emotions.

    The moon has a magnetic pull that creates an irresistible feeling of wonder. No matter how many times we gaze up we still feel the same. Likening the moon's light to your poetry says one thing to me: I better wear shades!! Lol

    Well done,

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Lol, thanks. I hope the shades come in handy.

      I have missed writing little poems with 9 syllables.

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