Comments : Friendly (9 syllables)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Lucero

    There's 11 syllables here, by the way.

    just kidding (sorry)

    This is a charming and sweet little poem that cheered me up immensely, for some reason.

    It's just a 'friendly' sort of write that has all your quirkiness stamped into a tiny space.

    Keep doing what you do, Lucero; you are a breath of fresh air on this site and entirely original.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Lol I almost went to double check the syllables. thank you Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, how is it possible that you made something beautiful out of 9 syllables.

    You have a hug talent.
    Em