Comments : Nothing Less Than Divine

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lustreless skies turn blue

    ^^

    What a great line. I love the word 'lustreless'; highly underused, in my opinion.

    Lovely write and a warm welcome to the site, by the way.

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Nicolette

      Ah thank you. :) One of my favourites on this site happens to be yours, Anna Elizabeth May.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Thank you, Nicolette.

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Oh Nicole, this is lovely... These lines standout

    Say it one more time, show me all your love
    Kiss me tender
    Never surrender
    You are the brightest star, there's none above
    ^^

    butterfly in my stomach flew while reading this.
    well done

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Nicolette

      Thanks a lot! I feel as though the last line could have been a lot better but I wasn't sure how as I couldn't find another sentence to finish with 10 syllables.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Nicolette, this is such a beautifully rhymed piece.

    Welcome.
    Em