by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist Sep 19, 2016
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Each pain in my heart is biting every fiber of my muscles, |
by mossgirl19
Close to home...but I don't want him dead. Haha! |
Thank you so much for reading |
Very nice love write as it holds both sadness as well as aggression. I like the most of your description of pain. It's an amazing love write. All the best. Keep on writing. |
by Brenda
Well written poem about infidelity and it's fall out. I really liked your descriptives on the pain and hurt and loneliness that you feel when someone betrays your trust. Well done- |
Thanks Brenda for the beautiful feedback. ..and I'm really glad that you like it. . have a blessed day and happy writing |
by Em
I agree with Ben. |
Thank you Em.. I'm glad you guys liked it |