Your Heart (Concrete Form)

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Sep 20, 2016


-------I've got a----------------------------* hundred *-------
------hearts who beg--------------*for---me.----But--I *-----
--chose the heart who--------*doesn't-- love---- me. *---
---The heart was once I----*set free,-Who stole--my *-
-heart and my memories.--*Even--your--tears-are---*
-not---meant for me, just--ask,---I'll---dry--it,--just *
-turn--to me. I'll hug you-with--my---arms---open, *
--And--whisper shhh. With me,-I'm--sure--you-can.*
---On -my mind still, linger-the-way--you---talk *
--The--way-you---smile and---even--your---jokes.*
---The-way--you--bit--your--red--and-awesome *------------Lips.-It--tickled---my---heart---down----to *------
------my-fingertips.----I am---not--expecting *-------
---------anything--from--you,--Coz--I--can't *------------
-----------own your--heart like-others-do.*--------------
------------You can live freely,-You--can *--------------------
-------------------love somebody,--Just *------------------------
-----------------------let me love you *---------------------------
----------------------------Endlessly. *-----------------------------
--------------------------------* :( *--------------------------------

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  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    I agree with EM, never seen anything like it!
    Nominated!

    Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is stunning!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    This is awesome. Aside from the lovely poem, the extra time you spent calculating the spaces and things to shape the appearance of the poem makes it really special.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Dib,
      Glad you're back..thanks for your time (precious time) lol. and also for the compliment
      Have a great day
      ~Ate Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Dean Kuch

    Not only is the poem well rhymed and makes a pertinent poetic proclamation portraying the pure power of love and friendship, you've also managed to compose it in such a way that it resembles a heart.
    How lovely.
    Well done, Golden anGel Rhapsodist. A very artistic offering indeed.
    ~Dean Kuch

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Dean,
      thanks for having time reading this :) and I'm glad you liked it. again thank you.
      have a great day
      Gel

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