by Sean Allen Jul 8, 2004
category :
Life, society /
about society
Well I guess I'm trying to say, |
by nikki
that was a very interesting and thought provoking poem, really made me think, i like it alot, great job, i really love the way it rhymed, it was very well set out, and the flow of it was very rythmic and i think it would make a great song! great work! |
by Aken Sol
This poem was damn good, and that's the type of work I'm talking about. The rythmn of the poem is great and the ludicrous ryhme sceme is amusing. Plus the thought-provoking theme... |
this was absolutely awesome! Very entertaining and thought-provoking! Very neat rhythm. Keep up the great work! |