Speaking to You

by Sean Allen   Jul 8, 2004


Well I guess I'm trying to say,
well that is to say,
what I really want to say,
is that in this world today
there are too many ways
for me to get what I want.

So I guess I should try,
well, I know there's no "try,"
you can only do or you die.
Oh me oh my!
So I guess I'll lie,
and say that I'd rather die
than say this:

The world is so unfair,
and everybody cares,
but nobody stares
at the problem.

Some people are poor
and walk through the door
of the unemployment office.
Every day of their lives
passes by, passes by,
as if nothing will ever change
and it's so strange
that I should have it all.

I have lots of money.
It isn't very funny
that I don't have to work
because my parents have enough
to get along.

Which isn't to say,
well what I'm trying to say,
I want to say,
for the record this time:

I want to try,
please let me try,
yes I'm going to try,
to make it better.
I have ideals;
I'll make them real
this time.
It's time
for my turn to try.

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  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    that was a very interesting and thought provoking poem, really made me think, i like it alot, great job, i really love the way it rhymed, it was very well set out, and the flow of it was very rythmic and i think it would make a great song! great work!

  • 20 years ago

    by Aken Sol

    This poem was damn good, and that's the type of work I'm talking about. The rythmn of the poem is great and the ludicrous ryhme sceme is amusing. Plus the thought-provoking theme...
    Here's my take on it. You know that you're lucky to be living in such a great nieghborhood while other people suffer but you don't know what to do yet you still want to try and make other people's lives better like yours even when other people don't agree with you?
    Aken Sol

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    this was absolutely awesome! Very entertaining and thought-provoking! Very neat rhythm. Keep up the great work!