this was absolutely awesome! Very entertaining and thought-provoking! Very neat rhythm. Keep up the great work!

This poem was damn good, and that's the type of work I'm talking about. The rythmn of the poem is great and the ludicrous ryhme sceme is amusing. Plus the thought-provoking theme...
Here's my take on it. You know that you're lucky to be living in such a great nieghborhood while other people suffer but you don't know what to do yet you still want to try and make other people's lives better like yours even when other people don't agree with you?
Aken Sol

that was a very interesting and thought provoking poem, really made me think, i like it alot, great job, i really love the way it rhymed, it was very well set out, and the flow of it was very rythmic and i think it would make a great song! great work!