Fire of Creation (blitz form poetry)

by Everlasting   Sep 21, 2016


There's guns
There's fire
Fire rising
Fire burning
Burning houses
Burning people
People screaming
People running
Running madly
Running tiredly
Tiredly falling
Tiredly dying
Dying painfully
Dying sadly
Sadly crying
Sadly sleeping
Sleeping eternally
Sleeping forever
Forever in hell
Forever in pain
Pain in body
Pain in soul
Soul exhausted
Soul at war
War of bullets
War of money
Money for power
Money for destruction
Destruction of life
Destruction of love
Love should live
Love should prosper
Prosper for always
Prosper for the children
Children of the future
Children of salvation
Salvation of our Earth
Salvation of our species
Species that can change
Species that can save
Save us all
Save us all
All the planet
All the world
World that needs our help
World of our creation
Creation of havoc or prosperity?
Creation of hate or love?

love
prosperity

Written by: L.L.

Inspired by:http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=215681.

Thanks for introducing me to anew form.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello L.L,

    you nailed it...it's done with perfection, the rhythm is perfect too. When reading this out loud it's like I'm a rapper. .lol The blitz form is one of my favourite the lines is short and it's like a tongue twister.

    By the way thanks for including my link under your pieces. .
    Sweet Acknowledgement

    Have a blessed day

    Gel

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