Boy [Acrostic + Senryu]

by Everlasting   Sep 21, 2016


Bouncing like a ball
on hallway while mother shops;
yippee, yup! said, who?

Written by: L.L.

Inspired by Jessica's poem - Sky ( Haiku + acrostic )

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  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Excellent!! What else can I say...well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by stormingdance (Lessa)

    Awesome, I was actually working on my next one titled Boy, for my two little boys! ^_^ Yours is lovely, will share mine when it's finished! Take care! 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    This is fabulous

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Nice acrostic and haiku combination...

    B
    o
    y

    perfect 5 7 5 syllables

    a 5/5 for this.. well done

    Gel

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