Empress

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Sep 22, 2016


There is an empress
waiting outside my window
Is she here to haunt me or

Is she here to set me free?

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Not sure if there is a form with a syllable count of 5/7/7/7. The closest form would be a Sedoka, being 5/7/7.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi Jessica as Ben said if you aren't sure of the form create one.. How about sedoka+1 lol?
    Anyway to the poem... A powerful piece that can be interpreted in many ways but do not let her drag you in :)

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Not sure of there is a form? Then damn it, good woman! Invent one! lol

    A dark an interesting poem that could have many connotations, I suppose. To be fair, I like that in any work of fiction.

    Take care,

    Ben

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