Wow... I loved this....

I loved the picture this painted of ideas (they turned out to be little elves in my mind... LOL) all with children and siblings! Oh great.... I'm going to have some WEIRD dreams tonight!

GREAT POEM!

Heh. Look what you did Sean. Well my 'ideas' take the form of leprechauns that bounce around and tell me to burn things...
anyways, this poem was good and the idea was unique, but the format of it doesn't match up with your other poems.
Aken Sol

btw, that picture is hotness ;-)
Aken Sol

Right I thought someone would bring up the lack of women, yeh, not enough syllables to allow that, mebbe I should just change it to women period.

Wonderful poem, Sean. Great theme. Nice flow and wording; filled with thoughts. Great work, keep it up.
Take care!
Kristina

you paint a nice picture.......I really liked this one as well....