Star (concrete form)

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Sep 22, 2016


--------------------------------A------------------------
------------------------------star-------------------------
-------------------------------is a-------------------------
---------------------------luminous----------------------
--------------------------bag of gas----------------------
------------------------Have red, -------------------
------------------------yellowish, and -------------------
-----------------------bluish cast. Red-------------------
---------------------if it's temperature, ----------------
-at lowest.-Then blue when it becomes the hottest.
---Stars are the black body that glows, with a great--
-------temperature and brilliance. Who knows------
-----------about the black hole? It doesn't---------
------------shine, no light, no radiance. Stars---------
---------------emits color spectrum, like--------------
-----------------a blast of sonic boom.----------------
-------------------It gives us an optical------------------
------------------illusion, that makes-----------------
---------------you think its twinkling on --------------
---------------It also had different sizes ---------------
------------- Giant and------------supergiant ----------
------------ surprises------------------White ------------
----------- dwarf -------------------------called ----------
-----------the--------------------------------- star ----------
---------corpse,------------------------------Yellow-----
--------dwarf,-----------------------------------the------
-------category ---------------------------------our------
-------SUN----------------------------------------formed.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Fantastic poem!

    Really good word choice and that shape is crazy!! I have tried to write like this but usually struggle and then abandon it lol great write!

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thank you guys for the comments...this form is a very challenging form... if I can do this I'm sure,
      you guys can also do it.

      again thanks,
      Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Double comment entry

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thank you, Sir Ben for such a beautiful comment.I'm glad you appreciate my piece...

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    This really is very good. Concrete poems aren't easy to achieve on this site so I admire your perseverance with them.
    What I admire more (and it's too little noted on this site) is when someone not only has the capability to learn a foreign language, but then write poetry in it. That's no easy task and so for that, I applaud you.

    As for stars, I will look at them differently from this point forth!

    Take care, Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Good job with the shape poetry. Its a difficult one to do and you managed to pull it off with a nice description about a star...well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Really cool and very informative write-I really liked this a lot-

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