Comments : Harvest time (Haiku)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, as always a great haiku by you . I have to admit I had to look up equinox as I have never heard of it (lol) but what a perfect ending to the whole piece.

    I cannot believe how fast this year has gone by, blink and we would have missed it right?

    Em

    Edit: Forgot to mention the beautiful imagery (I blame my age lol) reminds me of crunching the leaves when smaller (hell, I still do it hehe)

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Excellent Haiku and timely too. Where has the summer gone L :( Millyx

  • 8 years ago

    by J Nair

    Michael Hello,

    Such a beautiful description and so succinctly put.
    like Em says i too love to crunch those crispy leaves, rather stamp and do a hopscotch dance....

    But the kind of landscape that you are describing, the range of colours of autumn leaves and ripe fruits ready to fall into your laps... is something i have only seen on postcards....what i am witnessing right now-is heavy rains slashing down my window pane. It is still monsoon and green out here....

    enjoyed your poem :) thank you.

    Jay

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael

    This really is a genuinely stunning haiku from you. I know compliments can be thrown around left, right and centre on this site, but this is beautiful.
    Words like 'crisp', 'fruit' and 'furl' make this a truly...scrumptious! that's it - a Scrumptious little read! an absolute pleasure that cheered me immensely!

    Lovely, lovely work.

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, lovely haiku! Fall is my favorite season and your poem describes it to a T.

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Im standing under that tree, catching apples!

    Love this haiku!

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Colorful! In just three lines you have brought the color of the changing season...nice.