by J Nair Sep 23, 2016
category :
Life, society /
other
Ahoy ahoy, how does the whistle of the steamer blow? |
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Jay, |
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Hello Michael :) |
by Hellon
I think a of people may miss the message behind this poem because it's camouflaged in a way. There is so much hustle and bustle going on and you capture the reader in that straight away but...that little boy with the rumbling tum stays in my mind when the steamer's gone and the horses have retired for the night...what happens to him???? |
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Dear Hellon, |
by Ben Pickard
Firstly, let me just say that it's lovely to see some new work from you, Jay. |
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Hello Dear Ben, |
by Em
I love this piece because of the visuals and the sounds within it and when reading it aloud it sounds fabulous. |
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Dear Em, |
What a delightful visual and auditory piece. I could really imagine myself there listening to the sounds of the steamer. Milly x |
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Dear Milly, |