The style of this is intriguing. Recycling the final word in each line to recreate a new sentence that flows on so well must be quite challenging, and you've pulled it off here. I love the content of the piece, too. Well written and original. 5/5

Hello victor and welcome to P&Qs

I have to agree completely with Ether as this is original and must be hard work recycling the words to recreate a brand new line that flows on so well but you mastered it.

Em

Nice loop poetry form. Nice voice and story.