Gel, another beautiful piece from you.
I see the year lol I would have only been 10 then and starting out in the poetry world haha.
Lovely, Em

So, you are telling some classical loving memories about your past. I think this very special and also a very impressive write. I think this poem is a type of Couplet form. As I had told in my previous comment that you are so good at writing love poems, I say the same for this too. I think this is your strength. These memories often comes in people life, sometimes it brings great sadness and sometimes great happiness. It's a part of us all.

So you had written write a very long time ago, oh! and I have read today. I would had been only six years old when you wrote this. Ha ha! 20th Century poem.

I adore this write. Have a nice day.

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