Comments : Like a Nightmare and a Sweet Dream

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    A wonderful piece full of lovely, dark imagery. I like how you want to paint the night, light as we never know what's lurking in the dark lol.

    All the best, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very well written piece with some lovely use of language, all wrapped up in a layout that's a joy to read.

    Take care and stay well,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you.
      :)

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Well imagined.ur imagining capacity is awesome.
    A vry well written piece.
    Keep penning.:)

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    This is beautiful!
    Absolutely gorgeous and well written!
    I could feel myself longing to paint the night...to see the colors come to life around me...keeping me from falling into another nightmare.
    The darkness truly can be haunting.
    A lovely poem...I enjoyed reading it!
    You're a very talented writer!
    Keep it up :)

    • 7 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you a lot!
      ^-^