Comments : The Wildflowers

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Andrea,

    I love the format of a personal statement followed by a stanza.

    It shows the beautiful intimacy between you both; hearing words, stanzas without any sound being heard.

    Magic!

    Take care,

    Michael x

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, this is just beautiful.

    two lovers upon a broken swing,
    began to swing.
    ^^
    Loved this because it shows that even though things may be 'broken" together you can fix them and become invincible.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you Em,

      My husband and I we float on our own cloud...love him!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Aww that's lovely :)