by Em
One word: Wowzers!!! |
Wow! A collaboration of a 2 legendary Authors . ..what can I say ?. I'm a fan.. bravo ! Rapunzel was a story every kids love but grown up may love it too because of this. .This piece deserves to be place in the front page. |
by Naughtymouse
Simply amazing, you two should do collaborations more often, i LOVE this write : |
FUUUUUUU you too! This is simply stunning. two awesome writers getting together and coming out with that! GOD SAKES!!! I have nominated and i expect it'll win. well done |
by Maple Tree
Holy moly! |
by Brenda
Daaaammmmnnnnnn..........Amazing! You two, ok, I've got nothing...lol. |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks so much for your comments. Can I just say that this was a real labour of love that took a lot of hard work and a few tantrums on my side, so thank you to Michael for putting up with me! |
by Em
Ben despite you spitting your dummy out (kidding) this is a wonderful piece and for some reason every time I try to nominate it, the vote thing disappears so I truly hope it has been nominated. You gentlemen are two guys I look up to on this site as you have been there and helped me with many pieces and I'll admit Michael is a great man to work with but I will not put up with your tantrums Sir Ben :p lol |
by Ben Pickard
Em, all your comments are worthy and appreciated, so thank you. |
by Em
Lol Ben.. I forgot to ask how did you guys know the story so well.. Is there something you aren't telling me like your fixation with Disney princess films :) lol |
by Mr. Darcy
Thank you all for these lovely comments. |
by Ben Pickard
Michael - a glutton for punishment you may well be but, for my part, working with you again would be an honour. |
A Masterpiece indeed very worthy of two extremely talented poets. Fortunately I am voting late this week so I have just nominated Milly x |
by Mr. Darcy
Thank you Milly. X |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Milly. All the very best. |
by Shruti
This is really a masterpiece as mentioned. Superb! |
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Shruti |
First of all I would like to congrats to both the writers for creating this magnificent write. This poem has a mighty strength to be on top on many levels. |
by mossgirl19
Oh! I am so very late in reading this masterpiece. A superb retelling of the age-old story of Rapunzel. I have always tried to write a sonnet, but have never written any. Sonnets are not easy to create as the writer has to conform to the rhyming scheme and meters in every line. To make five outstanding sonnets is definitely a bloody endeavor so hats off to you Ben and Mr. Darcy, our sonneteers for an awesome, brilliant work. |
Ooh ... thanks for leading me to this Ben, I'm in awe of the pair of you ... I can't even imagine how hard it was to collaborate on one brilliant sonnet, let alone five!!! |