Comments : Bitter Sour

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really like the narrative in this, it's really easy to read and I really like the meter in it.

    Good Job!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Ah yes, this brings back memories of a past really bad marriage, I feel you girl, been there and I totally emphasize with you. I really liked this a lot, it's good to write these bad past memories out, helps with the healing. Well done-

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Brenda,

      thank you so much Brenda... Just sharing this piece, just incase someone can relate to this..:) then I can say that "I've been there before"
      ..hahahah
      thanks again

      Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Gel,
    What a lovely piece. So much imagery! I feel this should be voted.. So many people are coming out with great works and I've used all my nominations! :(

    well done! you had me captured!

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi,

      Don't worry for the nomination... it's ok with me. :)

      And Thank you also for liking this piece... this piece is a labor of pain, hurt and love...

      Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi,

      Don't worry for the nomination... it's ok with me. :)

      And Thank you also for liking this piece... this piece is a labor of pain, hurt, and love...

      Gel